Don't listen to Rodrigogiraro-what'shisdoucheface. This piece is freaking awesome. It's very well put together, and frankly I don't see that much wrong with the text. Besides, your work is in a whole other legue from his.... Art, I guess you could call it?
I'm totally making this my desktop background. ^_^
okay, wow. This took my breath away. THIS is the kind of fan art that makes me proud to be a brony. It's beautiful, appropriate for any audience, and seems to tell a sweet sweet story. Bravo, I say. Bravo!